Monday, 9 May 2016

Autumn Leaves

WALT visualise what is happening in a text

 have you ever 
heard the sound
of autumn  leaves 
falling down?
red and gold 
yellow and brown
 they flutter softly
 to the ground


  1. fantastic drawings of your visualisation, Seddon. Keep up the great work.

  2. Cool drawings Seddon keep up the good work.

  3. Wow Seddon I like your drawing and everything in this. I think that you need help on your punctuation, and how you set this out it is nice but you should put a little bit more effort in this. Seddon this is really good but you should do this a little often but you need to put your punctuation in and everything like that!