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Monday, 9 May 2016

Autumn Leaves


WALT visualise what is happening in a text


 have you ever 
heard the sound
of autumn  leaves 
falling down?
red and gold 
yellow and brown
 they flutter softly
 to the ground

3 comments:

  1. fantastic drawings of your visualisation, Seddon. Keep up the great work.

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  2. Cool drawings Seddon keep up the good work.

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  3. Wow Seddon I like your drawing and everything in this. I think that you need help on your punctuation, and how you set this out it is nice but you should put a little bit more effort in this. Seddon this is really good but you should do this a little often but you need to put your punctuation in and everything like that!

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