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Friday, 28 August 2015

Glow Worms

26.8.2015


W.A.L.T  exchange boring words for exciting words

Glow Worms
Boring word - Moving
Better Word - Flashing

Sparkly webs on the rocks look like flashing stars.       



      

3 comments:

  1. Hey Seddon, Cool photo of the glow worms. Great job changing your boring words to more exciting words. I love your sentence about the glow worms because of it's nice vocab.
    You could of said "The Sparkly web looks like light blue stars trapped in a rock".
    GREAT JOB SEDDON.


    Thanks Kiana

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