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Wednesday, 2 July 2014

Hiding


I am scared in the pitch black, no one can find me. This is taking a long time.   I know they can’t find me here because I am curled up. “Aaaaaa! There is a spider web and there is a big  spider!” I whispered to myself.



3 comments:

  1. WOW Seddon, your writing made me feel like I was there. I could imagine being in the pitch black, waiting and waiting...
    A great piece of writing that was published in the school newsletter.
    Keep it up Seddon, I will visit your site regularly to view your fabulous learning.

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  2. Kia ora Seddon. I enjoyed you story. Tu meke. I could see you in my mind curled up in the dark - and then a seeing a big spider. In my head the spider was black and hairy - what did he look like in your head?
    from Mrs Morgan-French

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  3. Hi seddon i like how you where not afraid when the spider was in your hair

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