WOW Seddon, your writing made me feel like I was there. I could imagine being in the pitch black, waiting and waiting...A great piece of writing that was published in the school newsletter.Keep it up Seddon, I will visit your site regularly to view your fabulous learning.
Kia ora Seddon. I enjoyed you story. Tu meke. I could see you in my mind curled up in the dark - and then a seeing a big spider. In my head the spider was black and hairy - what did he look like in your head?from Mrs Morgan-French
Hi seddon i like how you where not afraid when the spider was in your hair